Sorry i haven't updated yet today, i was busy with final's and watching Tae-Kwon-Do testing, so i decided to give you guys another excerpt.
from chapter 2 (note, this is in the early early stages of revision):
The bus was almost to my stop and I was getting more
nervous and scared by the moment. Once it reached the closest stop to my
neighborhood i hopped off. It took about a half hour to walk to my house, when
I approached i saw a few empty beer bottles scattered on the lawn. I gnawed on
my bottom lip reconsidering actually going in, somehow my mind convinced me to
approach anyways. I knocked, no answer, so i walked in "Dad, are you
here?" i spotted him knocked out in his chair. he snored and smacked his
lips together, I glanced around and noticed he had 3 empty beer bottles by his
feet. I have to be really careful tonight, if I stay I may end up getting beat
up, which I am not in the mood for. I rubbed my temples and sighed before going
up to my room to put some more clothes and all of my favorite items in a bag, i
heard a thump and quickly, but quietly, shoved it under my bed.
"WHO'S IN MY HOUSE?" Well so much for avoiding a drunken Dad. i rolled
my eyes and called down the stairs "It's just me daddy!" i said this as
sweetly as i could trying to avoid gagging on my own vomit at the same time. I
approached the top of the stairs and looked down to see him with yet another
beer in his hand. "Renny Blayne,
well isn't this a nice surprise. Come down here, why don’t you ever come see me
anymore?" I walked down the stairs as he was chugging down the rest of his
beer. I slowly walked up to him and gave him a tentative hug, he crouched down
gripping onto my arms so hard he was probably going to leave bruises. I put my
hands in my back pockets so I had the ability to fiddle with my phone, I called
Axel and put him on silent. I smiled innocently "Well daddy i have been
spending some time at friends houses, work, and my new school in downtown. Its
hard to get all the way back here most of the time. You look kind of tired,
would you like to sit down? i will get you another beer." he picked me up
and threw me into the wall, after kicking me and slapping me a few times he sat
down in his chair"Go get me that
beer you worthless piece of shit"
~End of excerpt
There we go! So there isn't much else going on with me at the moment, i am just staying up late to type in my revisions, except i have actually just been playing around on the internet *slouches sheepishly*. I had a good day, my math final was really hard (warning there may be occasional swearing in the blog, and a lot in the book), my science was really easy. I wrote a really weird and horrible story (that will never ever be shared) in my 5th hour with a couple people, it was interesting to say the least. So i rode my bike to school this morning and it was windy so i wore two sweatshirts and it kept me warm, well when i stepped into the school i was burning hot. So when i got to my first hour (environmental science) i stripped of my sweatshirts, took off my socks, rolled up my sleeves and pant legs, and proceeded to lie on the cold tile floor. I let my shirt slip up so my belly was touching it. I was cooled down really fast, yeah i know i'm weird. TKD testing was yet again really cool to watch. There wasn't much else going on today, i get to sleep in tomorrow though, and then i have to go in to school for 7th hour to finish my dang math final, then it is Christmas break. Anyways i should probably get off and actually edit. Also am i still talking to thin air, i swear i have zero comments, and i see that only 3 countries have viewed me, are we going to spread the word or no? *shrugs* night guys, sleep tight, don't let the bed bugs bite!!
5 days until Christmas!!
I didn't approve any links with random words, my apologies that the internet likes to take over our sites/blogs >.>
oh and i will update every day that i have access to the internet
~Lonestar
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